I dub this the idiot corner. That's right IT'S MINE! *does daffy duck greedy bastard pose* >.>
Well this is the first thing I wanted to ask about.
http://i175.photobucket.com/albums/w160/Revenant_Inu/Areyouhappysasuke-.jpg
A friend of mine is a HUGE sasuke fangirl so I made this for her B-day. Can I get a judgment on this? But anyway.. I have tons of stuff I actually want to show here.From art to writings and even post a few dreams I've had. From time to time. Well anyway. I wish everyone well here and hope that we all find our reasons to be alive. Mine... To coin the phrase is "To find the answer."
Pandas on the storm.... Pandas on the storm.... Into this house we roam. Then to the streets we run. When the peeps aren't having fun it's to us they first shall come. Pandas on the storm... YEAH!
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Logged Soulless_Beast has 101 Posts (+10/-0 Karma) |
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If you ask me, it´s a little hard to read what is written on the image, and sometimes it´s a little confusing how the 3 images are placed, for example, I don´t think the Sasuke images on the right and left don´t need to be too much transparent, cause you kind of loose of sight the 3 images.
And of course, I too have my own reasons to be alive.
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Logged Emilio Morales has 1133 Posts (+25/-0 Karma) |
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Yeah I agree...it's so damn crowded,it makes looking at it...uneasy.To put it blunt,it looks like a mess.Sorry if you find that offensive,but that's how I see it. Using the transparency on the images make it really difficult to make out who they are,I mean..yes I know who it is,but how can you enjoy looking at the images...when you can barely make out what they are doing,what pose they are on,are they smiling/pissed off? etc.
The words..are okay,I guess...I can't really think of any other way to align it or make it better.Same thing with the background..it looks like you are cutting him up into pieces or it's like...one big puzzle.
What I can only suggest is...don't abuse the transparency,that's bad...especially with images of people/characters.If you're trying to present/show off a character,don't hide them...having them stand next to each other would work,with full opacity of course.
As for the background...I can't really say what to suggest,since I don't know how well you handle photoshop.Could try looking up photoshop tutorials for beginners.
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Logged Enid has 272 Posts (+11/-0 Karma) |
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Thanks for the input. And yeah it's supposed to be chaotic. It's inside an emo's head. But she liked it though. The lyrics are from happy by mudvayne and I think when I doubled the bg it got to be a strain. But yeah I can redo it. Once again thanks now ^_^.
Pandas on the storm.... Pandas on the storm.... Into this house we roam. Then to the streets we run. When the peeps aren't having fun it's to us they first shall come. Pandas on the storm... YEAH!
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Logged Soulless_Beast has 101 Posts (+10/-0 Karma) |
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I started with poetry now. ^_^b
Pandas on the storm.... Pandas on the storm.... Into this house we roam. Then to the streets we run. When the peeps aren't having fun it's to us they first shall come. Pandas on the storm... YEAH!
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I started with poetry now. ^_^b
Cool! If you can make some sort of melancholic poem, let me know, I´m searching one of those for my manga :P
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Logged Emilio Morales has 1133 Posts (+25/-0 Karma) |
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This one is one of my latest... It may work and may not. It's about the high life and the costs it takes to keep it:
Title:Requist for the fallen...
"Today we live and die as king and queen."
Sovereigns of this world...
"While tomorrow we bathe in the blood of tyrants"
Cast deep within the void of our self rages...
"But what of the next?"
Pity me oh soul to mourn this tale....
"Will we fight for our civil freedoms and gentle tongues?"
Is there no other way?
"Or shall live on as slaves"
Do you challenge your convictions?
"From this day we bid farewell to our kinds spirits and fleeting hearts"
And greet our shield and sword.
"As Calgary drums and curse become our rallying cry, our hymn, and our very beating hearts. We grow wayward of ourselves."
"Stalwart in peace but craven, Sure of our words but doubtful of our spirits. What are they truly to become? How we will contest?"
"I will not die... not without taking them with me." These words rang out into the very confines to my blood and filled my veins with fire...
"It is better to die on your feet..."
Tell them this, for me: This fallen bard who sings of wars and melodies
"So that all I love will remain"
My vow unto myself...
"...than to live on your KNEES!!!"
With this tongue I challenge heaven's plight!
"Why must we continue this?"
With these fists I challenge my adversaries!
"This is my reason to live..."
And on this soul, for this day and this time alone...
"I WILL HAVE THEIR HEADS!!!!"
Nothing will stand before me....
"We will cry out for ourselves and make the names heard known!"
Harken to me all who would hear.
"With this rage I will not stop!"
Cry out if have will to fight....
"With this hunger I will not be quelled!"
Stand at my side if you will be satisfied...
"With this thirst I will not be denied!"
March forward in stalwart grace if victory is ours....
"As the battle is dying and the day begins...."
We shed tears that were long forgotten...
"We pray for our fallen."
But teach not the legacy that comes after....
"Yet wonder why war exists...."
Deny this and fight have you the will...
"Lay ends these ends to rest."
Let us cry no more...
"And with this my requiem is fulfilled..."
I can finally rest. *smiles*
« Last Edit: January 30, 2008, 10:32:03 PM by Soulless_Beast »
Pandas on the storm.... Pandas on the storm.... Into this house we roam. Then to the streets we run. When the peeps aren't having fun it's to us they first shall come. Pandas on the storm... YEAH!
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Logged Soulless_Beast has 101 Posts (+10/-0 Karma) |
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I started with poetry now. ^_^b
To be perfectly honest, this is terrible.
You need to work on organization, and contextual vocabulary.
Life is like an illusion, like a dream waiting to be awakened.
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Logged The13thChyld has 41 Posts (+10/-0 Karma) |
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I totally suck at poetry, so I can´t tell you if this poem is good or bad :S
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Logged Emilio Morales has 1133 Posts (+25/-0 Karma) |
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Eh. It's your opinion. Some think it's good you're the only I've seen that said otherwise. But hey. Criticism either way. If I can't take it then I don't need to put it out there. Thanks for the input all. But to Emilio, if you give me an idea more on what it is you're doing I could better write something. By the way to 13th. If you got the context of what it's about then maybe you'd think different maybe not. IDK or really care. So take care, have a nice life and the idiot will return. This time with Def Poetry. And if you don't like the next one.. I'd like to see some of your works then so maybe I could learn a thing or two. *dances off to the sunset to Harder to breathe by Maroon 5*
Pandas on the storm.... Pandas on the storm.... Into this house we roam. Then to the streets we run. When the peeps aren't having fun it's to us they first shall come. Pandas on the storm... YEAH!
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But to Emilio, if you give me an idea more on what it is you're doing I could better write something.
Well the basic idea of the poem that I´m looking for, it´s about "loneliness" someone who has been all alone in his entire life, and began hearing voices in his head while he´s asleep. Maybe something about, the difficult of not to trust in anyone, like living a life apart of anyone else.
So the basic idea will need to be, "A person that does not trust in anyone, he is living all alone and he looks tough on the outside but in the inside, he is afraid of his reality."
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