Persona conversion to HERO system

Constrution site mishap during the building of a corporation. Serveral people died during a misfire of explosives. The foreman tried to sue but big business beat him by throwing around money.

With not only the guilt of losing his fellow friends and coworkers, having to explain the situation family by family drove home the fact the he really let them down or so he thought. During this he went through bouts with drinking, gambling and lewd crimes.

So much so that it eventually drove away his family. As his last resort he snuck into the building and decided that the ultimate sacrifice would be necessary to shut it down and avenge his friends' deaths. He hung himself in the main atrium in the hallway before the President of the corporations' office.

But while he had just jumped he did not know the president was there. Instead of showing pity the businessman began taunting him instead. Even going so far as telling him the reason behind the 'accident' which was that he did not feel like being bothered with expenses like healthcare and time management.

So if they were all dead it wouldn't be his responsibility and thanked him for 'finishing the job'. Furious the dying man tried to get at him but his own plan backfired against him. He died with the truth and the fury that had grown inside of him.

The experience was swept under rug publicly and it was said the foreman skipped town. You couldn't poke your nose into it without it being swung at. Time passed and the secret died with the president.

His kids had to take over the company even though they were still in high school. His son Kazeki and his daughter Tomiyu (strange name I know.) They had just came back from living in the states after hearing the news.

They enrolled in a private school called St.Hermelin High. Where they heard interesting and disturbing rumors of their fathers' business. Including one about a guy who hung himself in the building in order to get back at their father and that on the same day of the week that he hung himself the exact time the spirits surrounding that place grow violent and actually caused two deaths.

They blew these off as school digest until one night they were late going to a party and the clock struck at the rumored hour on that day. The room went chill and hot at the same time. Both of them were starting to get the idea that some rumors shouldn't be ignored.

Almost too late they barely escaped with their lives unsure of what happened but obviously afraid of it and then started looking into things. During this time they made another friend one who had a sad story. It was about how his dad had abandoned them. Behind a freak accident at his old job...

I borrowed a bit from the persona premise and I know it sounds a bit cornball. But... tell me what you think anyway ok?